कान्हड़दे प्रबन्ध (कवि पद्मनाभ - जालोर चौहान वीरगाथा, अलाउद्दीन खिलजी से युद्ध व जौहर इतिहास)

परिशिष्ट २५३
Khaṇḍa III
Verse
सह AK (H) pref. to मल्ल CDJ as more representative and also preser-
ving the initial rhyme better; (cf. III 64). .
सेल्हुत JL preferable to सेल्हय A (BKL) for the ending rhyme.
47 सहट्ट A pref. to सवल्ल BDJKL; cf. III 64.
51 भट A (D) adopted, as भलावु B, भाणुवु H, भलउ नई K, भामो L, are all un-
suitable.
जीण AK adopted; जाक CJL (D) also possible.
60 शाणउ (DJ) pref. to जोलउ A, जालु H, आलप K, for metrical reasons.
61 मल्हू BH (DJ) is the correct form; मलिक, मिलक KL are, evidently,
mislections.
62 मूलग B preferable to सिंघ AD (HJ), सिंघो KL, to avoid repetition with
सीहु immediately preceding.
63 लाछु A pref. to लोछु BHJ (DK) for initial rhyme with लापु immediately
following.
लापु A pref. to लंभु DJ (K), which, however, is also possible. In that
case लोछु लंभु नई वइरसी will be the alternate reading in the iv qr.
65 बेलाउत D (A) is the original reading > बेलाउल BH, बेलाउलि L.
67 पुरातल L (HB) is the original reading. It is interesting to note how
पुरातल > परातलि H > धरातलि CDK, a mislection.
72 बलीय A (J) pref. to बली DHL and अनइ बली K (B) for metrical reasons.
79 पलदल ABH (K) pref. to पलभल CDJ; both are onomatopoetic words
having the same sense.
रण BH pref. to the usual Rājasthānī form रिण KL (A) as it (चे रण)
rhymes better with पेरण immediately following.
82 अवाल्हं is the original word; निराल्हं B (L), अबेल्ह J are restorations.
87 बि सई D (JC) pref. to दसइ A (BHL) as giving better sense.
रलिया CK (AH) (> लीया BL) is preferable to रोलीया (DJ) in the context.
89 It is interesting to note how the proximity of अमावस led scribes
to emend a lectio difficilior like पूत्लीई to पिंड लीया B, which, in turn,
was restored as दर्म लीया J, राउ सारइ K.
94 चलिवंतउ AK (L) pref. to चलंतु BCDJ, as a Rājasthānī form.
95 मूलिगा A pref. to मूलगा BCDHJKL, as a Rājasthānī form.
96 रिणंगणि A (BHJL) noteworthy as a contraction of रिण अंगणि current in
spoken speech; cf. रायंगणि III 39.
99 दींथीइ D (ACJK) pref. to आंठांणइ H (B), हणायइ L as more representative
and preserving the initial rhyme.
105 न्हाटि AC (LB) is the proper own form; स्न्हाटि HJ (DK) emended by
the scribe is a Sanskritization of the same.