कान्हड़दे प्रबन्ध (कवि पद्मनाभ - जालोर चौहान वीरगाथा, अलाउद्दीन खिलजी से युद्ध व जौहर इतिहास)

२५२ कान्हडदे प्रबन्ध
Khaṇḍa III
Verse
9 ह्योम CH (L B), a Rājasthānī form, preferable to ढेस DK or ढेसि J for
ending rhyme with (दोम in) the next caraṇa.
वलि B K L pref. to दलि A (C D J) as more suitable in the context.
16 सिधार D (K L J) pref. as a proper OWR form; संढार H, सिहार A B C are,
probably, restorations.
17 जिसउ A (B J) is pref. to किसउ L (BC) as more representative and also
agreeing better with किसउ in the iv qr.
18 पाल्हूँ (A B H L) pref. to छंडालूं J (C D K) as more suitable in the context;
(cf. विषम दुर्ग मई सवि पाल्हीया II 75).
19 दीहइ A L (H) pref. to ऊडी B D J K as preserving the initial rhyme
better.
20 घण A K pref. to भट B C D H J L, as it gives better sense.
22 सहिस B K pref. to सहस A C D H as a Rājasthānī form.
जैस A (supported by ईस K L) pref. to जई C D J for ending rhyme with
the preceding caraṇa.
23 छइ A H L (B) pref. to मुखि C (D K); मुखि, however, also possible.
25 धाजी DK, a lectio difficilior, is the original reading > पांजी H, बीजी B L,
थीजा C, विजया A, all mislections.
गिहभो H (B C D J K) is pref. to गहओ A (L) as a Rājasthānī form.
अवश्य, a lectio difficilior, is the original reading > अवशक A, आवसिक J >
अवस्य (हुइ) C > आवश्यक K.
27 साजी K (L H) adopted as a more representative reading; मांज्या J (D C),
too, is possible.
29 घरइ A K pref. for metrical reasons; घरी C D H J L also is possible.
30 रूटउ (C D J) adopted; रूठउ (H K L), another form of the same word,
is also acceptable. It is interesting to note how साहणी > हांसणी H
by transposition.
31 वीर H J (cf. K) is certainly the original reading > चीर A B C D L, a mis-
lection.
दीजइ A K L (B) is pref.; रीजइ (C H J D) is also possible.
32 It is noteworthy how सूतै AB (L H K) > सूनै C D (J), a mislection
through similarity of the letters त and न in the original.
38 प्रमार A pref. as the Rājasthānī form (cf. पमार K L) and also as
metrically more suitable.
39 रायंगणि B (A) pref. as the OWR form current in popular speech;
(cf. रियंगणि III 96).
40 श्रीगिरण्ड K (A L) pref. to श्रीगरण्ह B H J as a Rājasthānī form.