कान्हड़दे प्रबन्ध (कवि पद्मनाभ - जालोर चौहान वीरगाथा, अलाउद्दीन खिलजी से युद्ध व जौहर इतिहास)

२५२ कान्हडदे प्रबन्ध
Khaṇḍa III
Verse
9 स्योस CH (n B), a Rājasthānī form, preferable to सेस DK or जैसे J for
ending rhyme with (दोस in) the next caraṇa.
बलि B K L pref. to दलि A (C D J) as more suitable in the context.
16 सिपार D (K L J) pref. as a proper OWR form; संहार H, सिंहार A B C are,
probably, restorations.
17 जिसउ A (H J) is pref. to किसउ L (B C) as more representative and also
agreeing better with किसउ in the iv qr.
18 पाल्टूं (A B H L) pref. to छंडायूं J (C D K) as more suitable in the context;
(cf. विषम दुर्ग मई सबि पालटीबा II 75).
19 दीसइ A L (H) pref. to ऊझै B D J K as preserving the initial rhyme
better.
20 धग A K pref. to भद्द B C D H J L, as