कान्हड़दे प्रबन्ध (कवि पद्मनाभ - जालोर चौहान वीरगाथा, अलाउद्दीन खिलजी से युद्ध व जौहर इतिहास)

: परिशिष्ट : २५१
Khanda II
Verse
· · ; - It is noteworthy how झाडभीड > the mislection कीटबीट K through the
similarity of letters झ and क in the script of this period.
127 आवइ A (BH) preferable to वीसइ DK (CJ) as more suitable to the
context and preserving the initial rhyme.
128 सूत्रहार JK is the earlier owR form. It is interesting to note how
सूत्रधार D (Sanskrit) > सूत्रहार JK (earlier owR) > सुहतार H (later owR) >
सूतार C (modern Gujarati).
133 रंडमाल A (CJ) adopted ; मुंडमाल BD (H) also acceptable.
140 त्रापड AH (L) pref. to त्रापडा J (BK) for metrical reasons.
142 तुरणी pref. as a Rājasthānī form.
144 अतिइ घण A (C) is more suitable to the context than एवडउ K (LBDHJ).
सविहुं A pref. as giving better sense than होइ BL (DHK) ; हुइ or होइ
also possible.
147 पली BJK is certainly preferable to बली ACDHL, which is quite
pointless here. It fact बली in the mss is very likely a mislection
for पली.
लिप्या is preferable as a Rājasthānī form.
148 बोल इसउ (B) adopted ; इसउ बोल K also acceptable.
152 (पइठी) जमहर माहि A pref. to (पइठी) पावक माहि BHK (CDL) ; (cf. II 146 अम्हे
सवे जमहरि पइसिस्यूं).
154 पडिउ A. It is difficult to determine the correct reading here.
भडिउ H (D) may be also possible.
155 सेटटी A adopted as giving better sense; the more representative
reading, however, is छूटटी BDHK (meaning ?).
159 एतलइ पहुतउ A (BHL) pref. as preserving the initial rhyme better than
पहुतु एतलइ K (CDJ).
167 वीरायतन DK is the original reading (cf. वीरायतनि J, वीरायतन L) >
वीरायन AC.
Khanda III
Verse
3 ग्या A pref. to गया BCDHJKL as a Rājasthānī form.
5 It is interesting to note how वसि ABDK gave rise to सेव C : वसि >
[वसे >] सेव C, by transposition.
7 घरि AB is adopted (though CDHJKL omit it), as the postposition
तणइ immediately preceding the word presupposes the existence of
a noun in the locative.
पाट AK pref. to ठाठ BCDHJ, as a Rājasthānī form.
मंदारि (K) preferable to मंदार ABCDHJ for ending rhyme with (इरि in)
the next caraṇa.