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परिशिष्ट २४७
Khaṇḍa I
Verse
183 दिति AE (K) pref. ; देसि CDG (J) is also possible. 183 b reading in
CDJ represents only one ms-family and is unsuitable in the context.
187 घरणी ABG pref. ; धरती CDEJK also acceptable.
Bhaḍāulī
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भडाउली B pref. (cf. भझाउली C, भटाडली D); भिड्डाउली AEGK is also possible.
3 सिरथि is the original reading (cf. 'सईवादी I '255; सीकरी IV 57) >
संघि A, सिंहथि B, सहयि J are scribal restorations.
9 मुहाडि AE is the correct original reading (cf. मुहिडि G, महीदै B, माहि दाहे D);
मुडाधानि C is a scribal restoration.
10 शेहय A adopted ; सेलहथ D, सेलहुत em. (B) are also acceptable.
45 लहिद्रया D (AC) is the original reading > mislections हलूहया B (ह and
'ल interchanged, and द्र misread as ह), लहिल्या E (ह being a slip
of the scribe for द्र).
51 प्रतिटा AEG (cf. also प्रतिष्टया D, प्रविष्ट JK) is the proper Old Western
Rājasthānī form ; प्रतिष्टा C, प्रविष्टिन B are Sanskritizations.
56 मनि A gives better sense ; however, मुत्ति BK (E) is also possible.
65 दीधा ABCDJK — निष्पा E, निखा G are noteworthy variants.
73 पड्या AK (cf. पाज्या B) pref. as more representative and preser-
ving the initial rhyme ; मान्या J (CD) can also be accepted.
85 ऊपररा A (JK) noteworthy as the original form > ऊपरा BCEH.
103 शव C (सव H) is the prevalent Gujarati form ; शिव ADEK, probably a
Rājasthānī variant of the word, would be misleading here.
104 हूंते pref.; थके हूंते K (DE) noteworthy as an instance of use of
parallel expressions both conveying the same sense. Or, perhaps,
it may be an instance of interpolation of marginalia into the text—
थके, a variant reading for हूंते, noted below the latter, having crept
into the text.
111-112 जरहवीण A (EH) pref. to जरहू BD (GK); (cf. जहरवीण BGDEJ; I 204).
129 रूप हारण्यु K preferable in the context; रूप हारतु E (CD) may also be
accepted.
140 पुनुप E (cf. धुनप A) pref. as a Rājasthānī form.
Khaṇḍa I
Verse
193 सावरइ A (D) preferable to साचरया GK (EHJE), as a present-tense
verb suits the context better ; however, नाचरया em (CK) or
साचरिया EJ is also acceptable.
196 दमामा (BJKE) preferred. दमामा CD (HA) is another variant of the
same word, and is also acceptable.