कान्हड़दे प्रबन्ध (कवि पद्मनाभ - जालोर चौहान वीरगाथा, अलाउद्दीन खिलजी से युद्ध व जौहर इतिहास)

२४८ कान्हडदे प्रबन्ध
Khaṇḍa I
Verse
202 असमुहीया ऊठइ A preferred to ऊठइ असमुहिया E ( D H K ) as usually the odd
quarters end in a verbal form in adjoining verses, and also
as the initial rhyme is preserved.
यलशाक A ( B D E ) pref. ; यलयाक GH ( K ) is also possible.
214 लडाइ D pref. to लहीइ E J for rhyme. लडाइ is the original form >,
वढाइ A, वादि C, होई K.
216 दीया AC ( J ) pref. to गाला BEHK ( D ) as the context requires a verb here.
220 रिण A ( K ) pref. as a Rājasthānī form.
221 कणवि A H ( E ) pref. ; कणसे B D J is also acceptable (cf. III 80, 101).
225 रोजी ABK ( H ) pref. to रेवंग CDEJ for metrical reasons.
229 वेणि BDJ (= Sk वीणा) pref. to वीण E, वेणा H.
232 त्रिणि DJ accepted; त्रिन्हि A, तिन्हि E also equally acceptable.
233 कूटउ नवि ( B C K ) reads better in the context than नवि कूटउं ( D J A H ).
234 Note — The word बीर in वानर बीर has, by association, lead BK to
restore as पावन बीर.
हणीया A ( H ) pref. metrically to मार्या B C D E ( J ).
249 बोलिइ D ( H ) (cf. बंधव J) preferable in the context to बोलइ A.
255 राय A B C D J K emended as राइ to rhyme with पूजाइ in the next caraṇa.
सईवाटी ( A ) is the original reading > सिवाडी B, सउवाडी D ( CJ ), छइ वाडी K.
256 b reconstructed from CJ; necessary for uniformity with the ending
caraṇas of the remaining Khaṇḍas (Vide II 168, III 251, IV 353).
Khaṇḍa II
Verse
1 रिदि J ( D K H ) pref. as the proper owg form (cf. I 9): ऋदि A B C
is a Sanskritization.
2 कृपा ABK pref. to भूमि CJ ( D ) as a more representative reading.
3 पुल्ह AK ( B ) pref. to पल्ह HD ( CJ ), as a Rājasthānī form.
4 रुलंता A ( K ) pref. to रलंता BCDJ, as a Rājasthānī form.
नयरि B ( A ) pref. to नगरि CDK as an earlier form (cf. I 18, III 124).
6 पहिरन AK adopted; पहिरणि B C D J is, probably, a feminine form of the
same.
7 दुख्या दीसइ D ( C ) pref. to भगइ दुख्या K ( BH ) as more suitable in the
context.
8 मुहुणि is the original reading, which, through false analogy with
मुह (Sk मुख) > मुंहि C, मुह थइ H.
10 दइ AK pref. to दिइ J, दि BCDH, as a Rājasthānī form.
दिवराणां ( AJ ) pref. as an earlier form than देवराणां C ( B D H K ).
11 एकइ एकि AK pref. to एकाएकि J ( D ); cf. Modern Gujarātī एके एके.