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परिशिष्ट २५७
Khanda IV
Verse
137 It is interesting how परमाण AB(D) has been emended as फरमाण
C (J) > फुरमांण K; cf. II 30.
139 छम्मास CJ is a noteworthy colloquial owr form.
140 छाडेसइ K (DB) pref. to छाडेस्यु A (CJ) as more suitable in the context.
145 मालदे वीर (reconstructed reading) is preferable to माल नि वीर B (K);
(vide एकलउ immediately following).
साहु (reconstructed reading) preferable to मारइ D (J); (vide लीघा
iv 145 iv qr).
153 जंई A (BK) pref. metrically to इहां C (DJ).
156 वलिवंतउ K, a Rājasthānī form, pref. to वलवंतउ A (BCDJ) as rhyming
better with मलिक immediately preceding.
171 आंदूं AL (DC) is the original reading > आधूं BJ, a scribal emendation.
172 अडारसा सातसा तणा A (D), the original reading, has been variously
emended by scribes who failed to catch the correct meaning of the
phrase.
173 ल्याव्या J (DC) is the original reading, and is preferable for rhyme;
आव्या ABL (K) are scribal emendations.
191 भरइ (साषि) KL is a noteworthy phrase.
201 ल्याविउ A (K) suits the context better than आध्यउ L (C), आव्यां J.
207 It is noteworthy how सुहिणा A > सूहुणा B > सहु D, सविहुं J, scribal
emendations through false analogy.
212 सिंद्धासनि A (LK) pref. as it is read by the Rājasthānī MSS; (cf. III
Bhaḍāulī, line 14).
216 गंजी A pref. to झगडी BDK, or मारी JL, as characteristic of the author's
style.
221 तेव्यउ [जाइ] K (AL) is an instance of the usual OWR passive con-
struction; it is emended to तेडउं (जाइ) D (BO), which shows the use
of a verbal noun instead. Such a construction, however, is not
very usual in the OWR.
224 राय CDJK would give the rhyme better; but राइ A (BL) pref. as the
context requires a noun in the Instrumental.
231 झुकंटंव L is a noteworthy colloquial form.
248 गुरडि ADL (K) is the proper OWR form.
252 टवी BJ is a noteworthy variant.
275 सहसमाह BL (A) pref.; सुहडमाह K (JO) may also be possible.
287 पक्ष A (L) is the original reading > [पंथ (cf. पथि B) > ] पंच JK (C).
292 शिंशुगालि BD (CJ) pref. to विणियालि K (L) for rhyme (with the preced-
ing word).
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